Sunday, July 27, 2008
Saturday, July 26, 2008
It's been awhile.....That's for sure.
Well....theres not much to say, I origannly was going to drop this blog, which I did....for two and a half months but now I'm back! Just don't ask me anything about fanfiction, I'm basically done, I will probably delete all my old stories, and start fresh, hopefully getting some stories up in September. But the doesn't mean I've stopped writing, no way, I just started a storie that I have had in my head for almost two months, so I have decieded to post the first chapters on here! So here is the first 600 words of chapter one and the preface (I have chapter one planned for about 4500 words)
Preface
12 months ago, I was blind, no not the kind where you can’t see, the kind where I didn’t know who I was. I was insecure, and gossiping was the only thing that made me feel better. But then some person opened my eyes, and I discovered my true self. And I have her to thank for me being who I am, a better person.
Chapter 1: The New Girl
“BEEP” ... “BEEP” ... “BEEP”
Ah, yes, right on time, the alarm clock from Hell. That’s the way I like to put it, the alarm that wakes me from my dreams that I wish were true, and reminds me that the Halloween dance is coming up in a mere few weeks, and I only have two weeks to come up with a plan for which girl I should take. But my thoughts are quickly battered out of my head as my Mom pounds on the door, insisting me to get up, or I’ll be late for school. Yes wouldn’t that be horrible, me missing school, the sarcastic voice in my head spoke.
Leaning up out of my covers I am blast with a huge bright light, the Sun. It never does seem keen on letting me stay in my morning zombie mood. My room is small, only able to occupy my bed, a small dresser, and my very old computer. Stretching, I get up and stomp through the mess of clothes on the floor, food, and other possessions and head downstairs.
The house that I live in was big, but not big enough to hold five children and two adults comfortably. With four levels including the basement my parents were only just able to squeeze everyone into the house.
Most of my thoughts were averted when my younger brother Jake suddenly barfed on the stair behind me.
“Aw, Jake that’s the third time in the last two days! I thought Mom gave you pills that stopped you from puking!” I said disgusted. He looked up, some barf dripping out of his mouth and yelled defensively,
“Pill don’ work!” and then scrambled back upstairs to go tell my Mom.
I sighed and continued downstairs.
Oh yes, having four younger brother and sisters all under the age of 10 was interesting, but mostly annoying. Me being the oldest out of the five secured my own room, while my other two brothers had to share the room beside me, and my two sisters had a room on the third floor.
Finally entering the kitchen after having to sidestep my younger sister’s duck, Pak, (I’m, still not sure why she ever wanted a duck) I found myself settled into the old kitchen chairs. The kitchen was the biggest room in the house, having a large arch window above the wooden table, and the cupboards, stove and refrigerator in front of it.
After a few seconds I realised I was actually alone in the kitchen, it was almost odd being in a usual crowded room and it being empty. Usually being alone in a room meant it was quiet, but quiet wasn’t a word in my house, it was like a petting zoo that never ended. Like right now I could hear my Mom shouting at my brother Jake.
“Jake I thought you said you would give those pills a chance!” A pause and then my brother responded,
“The pills are icky!” and then like always, the tears came.
Like usual, I got up and made me some toast, slapping on the jam, and sat down, and by that time my father was coming down the stairs.
Preface
12 months ago, I was blind, no not the kind where you can’t see, the kind where I didn’t know who I was. I was insecure, and gossiping was the only thing that made me feel better. But then some person opened my eyes, and I discovered my true self. And I have her to thank for me being who I am, a better person.
Chapter 1: The New Girl
“BEEP” ... “BEEP” ... “BEEP”
Ah, yes, right on time, the alarm clock from Hell. That’s the way I like to put it, the alarm that wakes me from my dreams that I wish were true, and reminds me that the Halloween dance is coming up in a mere few weeks, and I only have two weeks to come up with a plan for which girl I should take. But my thoughts are quickly battered out of my head as my Mom pounds on the door, insisting me to get up, or I’ll be late for school. Yes wouldn’t that be horrible, me missing school, the sarcastic voice in my head spoke.
Leaning up out of my covers I am blast with a huge bright light, the Sun. It never does seem keen on letting me stay in my morning zombie mood. My room is small, only able to occupy my bed, a small dresser, and my very old computer. Stretching, I get up and stomp through the mess of clothes on the floor, food, and other possessions and head downstairs.
The house that I live in was big, but not big enough to hold five children and two adults comfortably. With four levels including the basement my parents were only just able to squeeze everyone into the house.
Most of my thoughts were averted when my younger brother Jake suddenly barfed on the stair behind me.
“Aw, Jake that’s the third time in the last two days! I thought Mom gave you pills that stopped you from puking!” I said disgusted. He looked up, some barf dripping out of his mouth and yelled defensively,
“Pill don’ work!” and then scrambled back upstairs to go tell my Mom.
I sighed and continued downstairs.
Oh yes, having four younger brother and sisters all under the age of 10 was interesting, but mostly annoying. Me being the oldest out of the five secured my own room, while my other two brothers had to share the room beside me, and my two sisters had a room on the third floor.
Finally entering the kitchen after having to sidestep my younger sister’s duck, Pak, (I’m, still not sure why she ever wanted a duck) I found myself settled into the old kitchen chairs. The kitchen was the biggest room in the house, having a large arch window above the wooden table, and the cupboards, stove and refrigerator in front of it.
After a few seconds I realised I was actually alone in the kitchen, it was almost odd being in a usual crowded room and it being empty. Usually being alone in a room meant it was quiet, but quiet wasn’t a word in my house, it was like a petting zoo that never ended. Like right now I could hear my Mom shouting at my brother Jake.
“Jake I thought you said you would give those pills a chance!” A pause and then my brother responded,
“The pills are icky!” and then like always, the tears came.
Like usual, I got up and made me some toast, slapping on the jam, and sat down, and by that time my father was coming down the stairs.
Saturday, May 3, 2008
Hummm
So I was watching the chamber of secrets yestarday, and know when Harry sees fawks die? Well he would have jhust seen death right there, so he sholud be abe to see the things that pull the carrigas when they go to the castle right? Do you guys agree with me?
Saturday, April 26, 2008
7th chapter of BANL validated
Chapter seven of BANL is finally valiadated! Please remember to leave a review!
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Chapter 7 for BANL rejected
Yes it's true but chapter 7 was rejected. Which I was furious. I mean I waited like 10 days! 10! And all I got was not even to be posted, and the thing was really stupid but it is back in validation and it should be validated on wednesday. but i can't trust the validators any more becuease it takes ages to things validated now. So I deceided to give u guys another sneak peak (if anyone is reading this)
“Wait your Harry’s mum?” Fred asked shocked. “Wow” Fred ran his hand through his hair not believing his eyes “But you’re dead!”
“I know” she said laughing, her green eyes sparkling. Then confusion hit him. Fred was now pacing. “And that means that I must be dead.” Fred looked up into Lily’s shining green eyes. “And then where am I?”
Lily looked around, “Well I have never been here but isn’t this your shop?” She gazed at a couple of boxes before mimicking barf.
“Ya” said Fred slowly ignoring her, “But how is this possible?”
“What do you mean?” asked Lily, a puzzled look on her face.
“How can I be in this shop when it is still down ... There?” Fred pointed down through the glass floor that showed the shop. Lily looked at him hard.
“Fred please sit down, I’m about to tell you everything.”
G2g now ppl, cya l8er
“Wait your Harry’s mum?” Fred asked shocked. “Wow” Fred ran his hand through his hair not believing his eyes “But you’re dead!”
“I know” she said laughing, her green eyes sparkling. Then confusion hit him. Fred was now pacing. “And that means that I must be dead.” Fred looked up into Lily’s shining green eyes. “And then where am I?”
Lily looked around, “Well I have never been here but isn’t this your shop?” She gazed at a couple of boxes before mimicking barf.
“Ya” said Fred slowly ignoring her, “But how is this possible?”
“What do you mean?” asked Lily, a puzzled look on her face.
“How can I be in this shop when it is still down ... There?” Fred pointed down through the glass floor that showed the shop. Lily looked at him hard.
“Fred please sit down, I’m about to tell you everything.”
G2g now ppl, cya l8er
Sunday, April 20, 2008
Blah
Only two more months till school is over. THANK GOD! I just can't wait. i do wish the validaters on HPFF would hurry up, I've been waiting over a week now, which is really annoying because I want to get BANL all up nd finished so then I can start doing other stuff. Sigh whatever.
So long guys
So long guys
Friday, April 18, 2008
BANL Finished
Yes I have come to the final chapter of my first ever short story. I have now completed chapter eight of BANL which is the last chapter. And as I write this I don't think the joy has swept through yet. The sequel..... hummm I think it will start in September the resons, I am away from July to the end of August and I don't have a computer where I will be going so no writing :(
And before I start writing I will have to get a new banner for the sequel (banner by Dormiens probably)
Well cya guys l8er
And before I start writing I will have to get a new banner for the sequel (banner by Dormiens probably)
Well cya guys l8er
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